I wonder what it’s like
To live under the glittering sunshine,
For I live in the dark underground
With dirt and pebbles all around.
I wonder what it’s like
To sway in the rejuvenating breeze
Like my family upstairs do
Immersing in the morning dew.
I wonder what it’s like
To be patted by the evening drizzle
That makes its way down here,
Rarely these days, I fear.
I wonder what it’s like
To be visited by ‘bees’ and ‘butterflies’
Are they friendly like Mr. Earthwormy
Or minuscule like the microbes on me?
I wonder what people would say
When they see me, with body all hairy..
Will they call me a ‘beauty’
Or remark that I look ‘tasty’?
I wonder how it would be
To live on the other side of the crust
But I can’t try to shoot and thrust
As gravity tugs me into dirt and dust.
Maybe I should stop wondering
And be content with my surrounding,
Digging deep and sucking the precious
To make my family’s dinner delicious.
-©Surya Ramachandran
Daily Prompt : Roots
Wonderfully written!
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Thank you..😊
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😊❤
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Wow. Just wow. Personification is a great literary tool.
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Thank you so much..This kind gesture means a lot to me.😊
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You’re welcome. 🙂
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Great personification.. Be it the flawless orchid or the useful sunflower or the enlightening peepal, there are ‘hairy’ roots at work.
The conveyance of selflessness by the finishing lines, in a refreshingly playful manner that catches the attention of the child in everybody.. I must say, you are not limited to beautiful poetry , you also inspire it. Proof , is right among these comments you got.
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Thank you, Ignotus…I’m glad that you loved the poem..😊
When extremely talented bloggers like Tama-san here, tag along and enlighten us with insightful lines, I feel honored and encouraged.😀
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Excellent surya , today heard voice of the roots
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Thank you, ma’am..We often listen to the rustle of leaves, but never hear the whisper of the roots..We forget their existence too, don’t we? Even though they are vital for a plant’s survival…
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So true, your words changed the way of looking plants. Let’s start loving the beauty of roots too.
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😊..I feel blessed to hear that..yes, let’s root for roots too.
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Lovely poem. Loved this imagery “I wonder what it’s like
To sway in the rejuvenating breeze
Like my family upstairs do
Immersing in the morning dew.” Keep writing. Without strong roots, no human can survive! 🙂
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Thank you, Sheetal..I’m happy to know that you loved that part..Yes, without strong roots,it’s almost impossible to survive.
Thank you for your encouraging words…I’ll continue to do my best😊
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My pleasure 😊
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Wonderful poem.. but without those stable roots, the upstairs would not be able to sway and shine.. 🙂
Blessings to you 🙂
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Thank you, Sue…True..the roots are what sustain a plant..
Blessings to you too😊
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And true roots are what sustain us all.. 🙂 ❤ Hugs
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True…❤❤❤
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A lovely imagination, Surya. Well written! I would like to extend my support to the roots:
Only the root,
knows the mighty truth.
For without its breath,
the plant must face death.
Leaves may fall,
the root stands tall.
Life’s route,
is in the grip of the root!
-Yuhu!
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Bravo! Tama-san!!😆👏👏👍
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He He! I just felt bad for the roots. It was like they were envying the life above, which is a great perspective. I just wanted to remind them that they are the key! Don’t feel bad roots!
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Yeah…viva roots!
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😃😃😃
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nice one…straight from the roots mouth….
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Thanks a lot, FH😁
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A very creative and enjoyable post. Great work. 👍🏻
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Thank you very much..😊
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You’re very welcome ☺️
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I liked this very much!
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I’m glad😄
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A beautiful perspective from deep below☺️👍
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Thank you..😀
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