I know a drink that tastes bitter
But, on sinking into the body, becomes a nectar
Some call it a pain, others call it a ‘price’
I call it ‘the elixir named Sacrifice’.
The drink that’d rejuvenate my life,
Rescuing me from being a mere existence
Who’d get lost in the sands of time.
But to devour, nay, gulp it down
One needs tremendous courage and will,
The courage to bid goodbye to colorful spring
And walk down the frozen path that winter brings..
Many a time, I had lost the will needed,
Reluctant to face the cold that lay ahead;
And many a time, I’ve lost more than just my will
Due to the reluctance to pay the necessary bill..
I wish to lose no more than the warmth I’ve right now,
I’m ready to walk through the lonely, frozen road
And get fevers,shivers, frostbites and more
If, at the end of the bitter journey
That the elixir I gulp takes down my body,
I can taste the inexplicable ecstasy
Of transforming my life into a legacy.
-©Surya Ramachandran
This poem is my reflection on the idea of sacrifice..On the concept of ‘No pain, no gain’. Somewhere, sometime, I began losing my will to sacrifice. Life has taught me since then that I’ve no right to dream about creating my own legacy, unless I make the bitter choice of sacrificing my own comfort and momentary happiness.
One day, nay, today, I shall recover my will to sacrifice, again..
Love,
Surya😊
A beautiful reflection on the reality of life, Surya.
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Thank you..I’m happy to know that you think so.
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wooaahhh…. nice one there… i am thinking about what sacrifices have I ever made. hehe..
hellloooooo… sa-chan!!!! 😄😁😜😝 long time ..right? missed u. and your works.
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Arigato! !!
And you…You have a terrible habit of disappearing without a trace, don’t you?! 😓 I began to wonder if you never existed at all..😒
Hope you are alright, Itachi-kun.. I’d really appreciate it if you warn us before disappearing again..
Anyways…Welcome back!😄
Missed your presence here..
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awwwwww… kawaiiii.. sa-chan. 😊😁
hehe.. i am so sorry. Anyway i am here. Back again. ☺️🤗
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😊😄
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A Very Good Poem. Please continue writing….
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Thank you…I shall..😊
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It’s profound . Deep. Well Written..
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Thank you so much..😄
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Wow… Just wow…
It is the best poem that I’ve read so far, on wordpress..
I’ve no words to praise it. Just awesome.
Keep writing. 👍
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Thank you for you kind words..I’m flattered.
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Excellent…..
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Thank you, ma’am..😊
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wonderful poem. And yes you are so right to consider “legacy”. When we are 80 it is too late to think about legacy because we have already made it with our choices all through our lives.
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Thank you..My greatest wish is to die with the satisfaction obtained on living a worthy life..😊 Just like you said, the earlier we start thinking about it, the better..
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Beautiful. Can’t read into it enough.
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Thank you…😊
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One always has a choice ,except that one needs to be made always.
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True..
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